THE DEPARTURE

THE DEPARTURE

A Poem by penloverfool

When I entered the room that was full of strangers
It was you that first caught my eyes
All people were laughing like usual frolickers
But why my heart melted like ice?
 
I furtively looked at your celestial beauty
And memorized your countenance
I started to whisper your sweet name silently
Then my spirit desired to dance
 
The universe stood still and you were the focus
Of my poor heart in that daydream
I noticed nirvana and the angels’ chorus
Over the clouds of snow and cream
 
We trudged the busy street on our way to the train
And exchanged trivial talks and laughs
Yet, you were not aware of my horrible pain
That was brandishing a relapse
 
All the things were limpid that borrowed happiness
Would result to my life’s nadir
And in your departure my sorrows were boundless
You left me in complete despair

© 2012 penloverfool


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niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Posted 3 Years Ago


Some people have power over others without realizing it; love or infatuation can often be a one way street. You've captured this nicely.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Dimasalang, Masbate, Philippines



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MyHeritage: Celebrity Morph - Free genealogy - Old photos Penloverfool was born in Masbate City, Philippines. He was the third child among six children of Samuel and Liliosa Tambago; both were .. more..

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