Fake

Spine is broken, right behind the heart.
It bleeds down my back like a run on sentence that is clinging to a life story.
But only if...
You always.....
This is how....
Any utterence will sound the dark bells that deliver the same message.
You are not....
Tight grasps around nothing as it gets ripped from the hands.
Let go...
It was never yours, and will never be.
Give back the marionette stolen in the night.
To be real no more.

Reviews

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

This is very sad you have DEhumanized the lost love into an inanimate object. However there is something else I read in your lines. Not emotion but a belief that one doesn't deserve or never deserved. Lost love is part of life but the belief of being unworthy is very sad.
This is very good.

Sheer Terror

[Ua]

Thanks Sheer:) This one is about relationship with self, nurtured vs inherent, and releasing into surrender. Learning how to love all sides, even the battle. Thank you for your insights, they help me to be more aware towards my emotions.

Ua

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror]

You are welcome

[John the Baptist]

This one has the sound of a relationship gone bad, possibly a relationship where the speaker felt verbally abused and manipulated. It also has the sound of a declaration of independence. I love brevity that encourages thought. Good work.

[Ua]

Thanks John. This one came from a tough spot in me. Trying to open up to all sides so they can move through. I appreciate the good word, espescially from someone I can see comes from a similar heart space, your words mean alot.