Ring Ring Ring

it's for you.

It is the beginning of the end my friend; I'm a little shaky

we all know peace can never be solved with war

so the next time you hear, "I'm fighting for peace!"

shove a piece of fist across the jaw and watch more blood spill

 

In poverty, where boys would die for their skateboards

men can't even remain faithful to only one woman

it's beginning a sex revolution, and STD isn't invited

If you bust in, just remember to lock the door on the way out

 

BECAUSE mommy took all the toy guns out of school for safety

but it's OK, cause daddy bought baby a .22 today

and school gets skipped cause classrooms don't teach

so they imitate emotion given by the big screen movies

 

It is the beginning of the end my friend; I'm shaky

Dr. Sues says, "one fish, two fish, red fish, blue fish"

Jake can't read but he is a bright boy in his third year

dad asks, "why all F''s son?" his reply, "why all F*****G bottles?"

 

In poverty, where girls are fearless but full of insecurity

women can't even pursue desires of themselves 

It's beginning a one revolution, and all for one and one for all

if you get stabbed, shoot his eight year old son

 

BECAUSE if not he will grow up to punish you and your children

grudges being held over hands at the summer Olympics

and the ill weather has rage falling victim to savages

Life is the p***y and God is f*****g us all.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[DavidRyan]

So well written and passionate. I dig it. I like the "Why so many F's?.....Why so many bottle?" I think the part that really struck me though was the "grudges being held over hands at the Summer Olympics". I love imagery like that and the thought that it brings to the table. I mean, taking that in one of the directions it offers, it's insane how one act of anger or betrayal, or caused sadness, actually affect more people than just the victim. Can't wait to read more.

[fireblossom]

Controlled and directed. You are gifted and this shows your future voice. Rebel yells are cute but this world is serious and in this piece you say something we can grow on.

Love to you sweetie.

[Gavin Keary]

very deep. I love the rebel tone it has to it. I expect to hear more from you.