feeling you in mind

The feeling of the mind, around every side

Life is a struggle, need patience Every time

God listens, everyone, sure every time 

Do in life Act real, every time in your life 

Celebrate your life day by day by the  Act every time

This is the reality of the every human in his life

Defeat is not final, until to try is not stopping in life

Be Happy every time in your life keep it mind every time

Your Future you can create by the present act in your life

Reviews

[Donna]

Nice writing! I can tell that you write with a lot of feelings. That's great my friend!

[Minnie]

Something everyone can relate to! Great work!

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Samparks sam,
"Defeat is not final." We must not give up! Life is a process and your poem gives much encouragement. Thank you so much! Blessings kathy

[jlccomposer412]

i liked this part:Your Future you can create by the present act in your life. it's something that always we ignore.well done

[Celie Rose]

Enjoyed reading your poem. "Life is a struggle and patience is needed. Defeat is not final..God does listen. Very insightful poem. Well written and expressed.Thanks for sharing.

[horizon]

It is a motivational poetry...very nicely written