Soul around you

The soul is around you how I control you should know

Life is surrounding in your deep feelings you must  know

Our life journey just begun for search destination

You take me with a  tight hold on this  journey

I am going  flying in your feeling in every soul breathe

Life is the happy journey along with in your feeling

You are my destination I am your present every time

Want to see every time itself as a in your future

I promised to you I never permit you to go in the past

You are my present and we make to each other bright future

Be smile every time for me

You are greatest mine life every time

See, in my eyes every time

Our liking is the beauty of our life 

Reviews

[Hebe]

You give unselfishly. ...thats the message i get.... emotion comes threw!

[horizon]

Very deep feelings for your special someone haa...good...nicely penned...there are some errors I'll tell it later

[AquaWater5674]

Very touching...tender wisdom...I enjoyed reading it..
Debbie

[Emma]

Very beautiful, but I feel it is a tad disjointed at some parts.

[marilyn 1225]

beautiful loving poem testimony of the power of the journey of love present tense is important
r thanks for your writing!

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Sam,
The glow of love;,how beautiful it is; Unity's bliss!

[marilyn 1225]

very loving to your dear friend lots of happiness together!!