The Inside

The feeling of the inside, when you feel this lovely smile

Every moment of this feeling arises from you right time

This is difficult to me hide this feeling more time

You are the greatest in my feeling,can fly butterfly when you like

The Moment of so great with you every time at your side

What I tell you more the situation of my life inside

I  still miss you since to still at every moment in every time

You are my adventure, want to be continued with you  in my life

You were with me that time is real life, Now I am on your wait

When you surround me into in your real life

The life is saying still the sympathy in between us for each

You can see again  now this time  we need each just realized this time

  

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Sa mparks,sam
Hello. This carries true descriptive flavor and a nuance of fragrance for the subject of your love. Poignant and true. Thank you for the honesty. It is so fresh! Blessings as you continue growing in your craft. Kathy

[Celie Rose]

Such a Beautiful poem. I can feel each word. Your expression of words paints a lovely picture. Love these lines.."You are the greatest in my feeling, can fly butterfly, when you like.You are my adventure, want to be continued with you in my life." Your writing has improved greatly. Nicely written. Keep up the good work!

[creative Marie]

If i understand this poem correctly, It's a really sweat read, and yet not as overly romantic or dramatic like some other poems I've read. Great Job :])