Distance

Hi  there I can hear you

Nowhere I can't saw you

So,Far from you, Still hope for see you 

Some where my feeling around you

No idea where I hear you 

I am sure when you say hello to me

Don't know how much enticement for hear you

Life is uncertain still without you

Distant is nothing matter , How much sweet you.

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

I admire the deepened sense of longing in this poem. Longing to be nearer to the one you are wishing for. You write of true, inner emotions and express them beautifully!

[Celie Rose]

I like your poem. Very expressive and I feel the longing. "Distant is nothing matter We miss too much." Life is uncertain but distance should not matter when have the one person you love. Nicely written. Keep writing!

[Polly]

This is such a cool poem, I really liked how you arranged the words! As a poem, this was a very sweet/sad one, and it totally touched my heart. Good job. :)