Why life Smile

Once you tell me right, I never asked you Why

This is the Life of Philoscapy.

We can understand right

This is the only reason we still stay on this site

Life begun for you here as a stranger some time

We can now feel so closeness of our's life.

This is another matter when I want run from here you hold me so tight.

This is also another matter when You want run from here I hold you so tight

This is the stability of our dedication, we are still smiling so nice here

Some time when I stay alone with our feeling

I also remind The previous history of our life

What I feel in you, So you still hold me tight

Perhaps we design our life on the structure of truth feeling

The great amazing we hide the love from our life

Once I held you in my heart like a soul of my voice

You make my life truth in so easy way

You so soon fill up the space of my life

This is the result of our inspiration of life beauty

What our Theme, and what we given exposer our life.

Reviews

[Julia]

Cool. :) It is not easy to write a poem in a language which is not your mother tongue. You have nice ideas, keep it up.

[Tionge Rosalie Johnson]

"This is the stability of our dedication.." love this line! You have a talent for diction! I love the words you use in your poems and enjoy reading your work! Keep it up!

[kavya]

Hey srry i insulted ur poems coz i thought u r getting more reviews but.......u seems to be new in writing i didnt want to demotivate u........anyways keep it up......

[Jenny Leigh]

Nice. I seen just a couple grammatical errors. But in a whole, not a bad poem.