Why I open my Eyes

Nice life I get  from you Is this right I will know.

You aren't guess  my feeling still about you I well know.

The Goodness in my feeling about you this good knows.

We are together in our field we well know this point.

The time when you consecrate some solution with also me.

We are so closed in breathing very nice.

When your breathing air suddenly raise my heart beat nice.

In a bit moment when I relies when your breathing air touch my  heart, knock my mind.

why so happen suddenly this for given some indication of life

" Sam " I want to see how much time you can hide your feeling for me nice.

Your liking when melt with my liking completely is this right.

Where we can proposed to each other tell me happy place name right.

Why we are feel so fall to each other where as we are so closed nice.

The beauty of our life have decided make us Hero's of our life.

How I closed my eyes, the big problem of my life.

When I closed my eyes,My Heroin as you I see in side.

Your presence see after in eyes you make your hero so crazy for you nice.

Hero want to open eyes but bit afraid still your side.

He can't  do more , release you from his eyes.

He want this sweet feeling closed his eyes

Until  you not say that , dear come we should come out for celebration of this life

 

Reviews

[Akshita]

Lovely poem! It is so beautifully written.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Very beautiful poem. How one love can make you not do the things you once have done. How she's your life. Very good job :)

[manisha]

Lovely poem quite imagery

[T. Edana Talbott]

Very lovely and hopeful. Great job!

[Ellen Kolman]

Excellent poem...very heart felt and loving
I found it moving and exciting....I loved the line about making my hero crazy for me.........beautiful Sam