Treasure of Mountain

The smiles of huge trees, sustain in the mountain

Greatness of smiles, Is the reasons of kindness.

In fact, No one there for care of all the trees.

We are together for each other for life ever green.

When I was in the shadow of these green trees

Thinking the life of trees  how sustain still all without a care

Suddenly I feel some bit voice of leaf these trees

Hey !  We all have soul like you in our body like humans

We are smiling like you, we are breathing like you

The bit attention is we are not living for itself

Our sustaining  in one place is sufficient shows our dedication

Our love for human life given us motivation

The happiness of humans keeps  us every time smil ness

This is the reasons of our happiness from your forever lives

Reviews

[Celie Rose]

When I think of the evergreen tree, I think of longevity, pureness continual growth and caring, long suffering. It is wise gentle and kind. There are voices in it's leaves that do speak to us. "The smiles of huge trees, sustain in the mountain Greatness of smiles, Is the reasons of kindness." I like the metaphor that humans are like trees. "We all have soul like you in our body like humans We are smiling like you, we are breathing like you."
Your poem is nicely expressed and written. Keep writing.

[manisha]

Last line this is the reason of our happiness great line a pure selfless love can give u happiness more than anything. Nice poem

[Jesus & Gypsy Soul]

I've been relating to this a lot lately too. How love can make you feel NEW; green. A fresh start. ALIVE. Very beautiful, Sam!

[T. Edana Talbott]

This was so beautiful. A very peaceful feeling overcame me as I read this. Thank you