Friend are God Gift

Friend are God Gift

A Poem by samparks,sam

Your disliking I still keep safe in my mind
That time of moment I still remain in life
I forget the reason why you dislike my luck
Since that day I still trying to read your mind
In real the same day I read your minds
I feel necessary to hide the reason from your eyes
It's necessary to hide from the your eyes
I didn't  want to, as you so egoist in life
Mistake can  happen either any side
I was so friendly also that time
I also still less egoist human in this life
This is the reason still we are friend nice
I can run far away at that time
Your company stopped me at that time
I maintain still my niceness in this life
Friends can never build in every time
                    Friend are God Gift Remember, every time                     Good  friends are hard to come by.

© 2017 samparks,sam


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To me true friends are the ones that stick by your side through thick and thin, the good times and the bad times, the moments when you can meet their gaze and even during the moments when you cannot. To find a good friend, a friend who stands by your side always, is a testament of true unconditional love. They are a blessing to never be taken for granted. It sounds to me as if you have recognized this in someone, and for that have learned to count your blessings despite whatever has transpired within the friendship. It sounds to me as if someone is very lucky to have you in their life as well.:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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I like the length of your poem, and the theme. It's very true that good friends are hard to come by!

The grammar does need some work as someone already pointed out, but I think you have very good ideas!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your intention is great as is the idea behind the poem. The grammar needs a lot of work though. But you are at a great place. keep writing, keep learning, that's how you go on improving!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was pleasure reading. Keep going?!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Friends are not God's gift..........friends are fake!!!!..........now_a_days fake online friends

Posted 8 Years Ago


creative Marie

8 Years Ago

I disagree, if you view friends as fakes, you may never have known friends who were honest and faith.. read more
U have defined a true friend in a beautiful way...every line is amazing..

Posted 8 Years Ago


To me true friends are the ones that stick by your side through thick and thin, the good times and the bad times, the moments when you can meet their gaze and even during the moments when you cannot. To find a good friend, a friend who stands by your side always, is a testament of true unconditional love. They are a blessing to never be taken for granted. It sounds to me as if you have recognized this in someone, and for that have learned to count your blessings despite whatever has transpired within the friendship. It sounds to me as if someone is very lucky to have you in their life as well.:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

good... Nevertheless, U need to improve and its a platform that offers a lot of chance to improve. Use it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Friendship is something which can never be expressed in words but you did it...well done


Posted 8 Years Ago


Some are eternal some are ephemeral, but friendship is a bliss. Keep it up ☺

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem Sam! Good job! thank you for sharing with me

Posted 8 Years Ago



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samparks,sam
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Indian, India



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I am Chess player, My life always move step with thought of 10 steps ahead every time. Nature is my friend, Keep me smile. I start to write poems without experience of writing, but I can't believe my.. more..

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