Life is a hardship

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I have no bothered In this life, Your niceness is precious of this life

I am the only one  who aware for you in this life

Your silence says to me every time in this life

I want to be your craziness  every time in this life

We want to do more good for each other life

We maintain our patience for each other keep it mind

Life is a hardship,  we decorate it once in life

We are for each other this promise of our in this life

Greatness for someone will motto of this life

We filled every happiness for activate of this life

You hold itself every time in my faith, for assuring smile

Life is so beautiful  we prove in this life

Our cares ness for each other will example of  this life

I want to do more for you with thought every time

I have full confidence of my capability for you in this life

The matter is that great concern, How I spread for you sudden in this life

I want to give you surprise will happiness of this life

God Prepared you for this, I faith in god every time

When I listen voice sweet smile. Hey, you................

So crazy for me, since when I so busy paint your feeling in my mind

Just I realized our motto the kind of nice

Reviews

[Ellen Kolman]

I love your craziness in my life....I love this poem...it says so much...you are a treasure Sam...hugs

[Sammie]

Very beautiful the way there is this subtly about it the "hey look at me don't forget me. Because I see you." It is enduring to say the least.
The flow is nice, the theme is clear. Very well written. I enjoyed it greatly. Keep up the good wotk