Dedication of Mind

Adventure

This is the dedication of my eyes.

Saw you in my heart after scanning you by  eyes.

This is the result of your kindness you so fast spread in my life.

What you see in my feeling  still you so hide

My mind and heart were well aware about your first step in my life

Your silent smile, saying to me every time

Sam, be patient let me read your life

I am sure I am here,  come to you every time 

God sends me for you how better keep you with a smile

Life will become greater with you I assured you in  my life

Everything I make possible for you

You care my smile 

We are great for each other I realized you so many times

Very soon you realized when we delete all distance our life

This will be a historical moment of our life

Life completely make more greater with you

When we convert each other in one happy life

Reviews

[Celie Rose]

I really like this poem. I can feel the deep emotion. It is heartfelt and sincere."We are great for each other I realized you so many times Very soon you realized when we delete all distance our life This will be a historical moment of our life Life completely make more greater with you When we convert each other in one happy life" Good theme, the words flow nicely together. Well written and expressed. Keep up the good writing.

[Tionge Rosalie Johnson]

"when we convert each other in one happy life," this line is powerful! It brings up the intensity and devotion of love that the narrater expresses. You have a talent for evoking emotion into your poetry.

[RaeAlyn]

Very interesting poem. Again there is something about the rhythm with which you write your poems that is different. Not necessarily in a bad way.