Hear me

I still miss my feeling

I still nothing without her feeling

I try to search  everywhere

I still in searching in everywhere

She likes me but can't hear me

She afraid of my feeling

She is so brave seeing me in the struggle

I am going in depression for her

My nice friend hears me everywhere

Reviews

[Sammie]

Moving. Wow this review is hard because I struggle to find the words to say. The friendship spoke is sounds like a good one that when they are apart from each other it does not go unnoticed. So.short but so much emotion. I am speechless but in the best of ways. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing my friend speaking the words of your heart and it freely flows into the page.

[Tionge Rosalie Johnson]

I definitely feel the emotion in this piece. It is so relatable. Thank you so much for touching upon this.

[Rigu]

Something unique... Nicely expressed! Cool! :)

[RaeAlyn]

The friendship that you mention in the poem is evident in the words that you chose to use.

[Celie Rose]

A very emotional and heartfelt write. I feel you.
Sometimes patience is virtue.
"She afraid of my feeling
She is so brave seeing me in the struggle
I am going in depression for her
My nice friend hears me everywhere."
It is well written and expressed.