Thinking of Life

Lerner of implied life

The Lifestyle is the chemistry of humankind.

I was unknown about this style, my own lift me to  smile.

I hold a tight finger ,  start go ahead  step by step .

I was still happy because I cover lots  of distance of this new life.

I become so emotional person , my own hold  my finger so tight.

When I was to be reached near the my new aim life.

I become  so crazy about this new life, 

I want to be achieved more happiness of life.

Suddenly  I see sides of sky, One star come my sides with great style

When the star passed away besides my side

Some word of reality listens  my mind  

Don"t make confused  itself Sam, this smile of the life

Leave you any time,the excuse of explanations called you.

I know the realities  of life , Now I star feel itself  alone in life

I dedicate still for my own every time.

The greatness of Life I realize with respect every time.

This leaves me alone in life

I am Still  alive in  their feeling with quite a smile.

Once in life the star come again the my side

Given my finger again  in my own hand side

Life is life, Adventure is very nice

Reviews

[RaeAlyn]

Your writing has certainly evolved from what I have read in your previous poems. This was a good poem.

[Celie Rose]

I enjoyed your poem. It was very interesting. Acceptance is growth. It bring a person back to sound thinking. It was nicely written and well expressed.