nice is life

Nothing Without You

Life is nice, with your life

Life is live, with your smile,

Life is define,you are my life

when you smile, Look my life

Nothing can expected without you

Is the reality of my life

Want to keep you remain smile

This is the my life

Don't try to move from my side

Otherwise again one innocent life will died

Author's Note

spare few minute for me

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

It's nice to be happy in life
with someone by your side that has your back
always.

[Jesus & Gypsy Soul]

"Don't try to move from my side
Otherwise again one innocent life will died"
This is sad but sweet. You bring a lot of clarity to this poem. Keep writing! :)

[Ellen Kolman]

the message of this poem is clear...you want your love with you and happy all of your life....Lovely!

[GreenShoes]

The sentiments here are beautiful, you want your woman to remain by your side, and to remain smiling, because life is good with her but would be tragic without her. But I think you repeat yourself by saying it's your life, the reality of your life, look my life, life is nice with your life. It needs some polishing.

[Elizabeth J. Gelinger]

Really nice poem, simple but nice. Really liked it.