When you say me

your smiling I like

Your voice is I like

Your feeling is so nice

Really you are my

I know you something hide

I am in wait your voice

when you say me

Sam you are sweet life

where as I tell you all night

This is philosophy of our life

Every thing my life in you

Every thing is your in my life

This is the real sharing of our life

Nothing remain in your life

Nothing remain in my life

All right is reserved in our life

you are now my copy write

I am now your copy write

This one rose is smiling in our life

This rose saying about our love life

we both are crazy for  each other

Live together for forever in life

You are the beauty of sam Life

You are the aim of your sam life 

Reviews

[J.R. Turner]

I really like this. I can understand what you are saying and the message you are trying to put across. I would however, definitely work on sentence formation and the grammar used because it gets a bit confusing sometimes. Overall though it is a good poem :)

[Lee]

hey friend!!!!!!!!!!!
why don't you learn English first?????????????
your versatile words create a joke here..........

[Littlelady]

Great poem
Really hit me with how i feel towards my boyfriend
Keep up the good work

[Archana]

Nice feelings.......but I think you need to work on your grammar and proper sentence formation.....keep writng

[Megan]

This is a very passionate poem, and you convey your emotion well. There is a little work to do grammatically, but other than that I think you do a good job. Keep writing!

[Ellen Kolman]

lovely poem Sam...thank you for asking me to read it...I understand what you are saying and it means everything to me too...I am sorry I cannot talk to you more right now, my work takes so much of my time....keep writing your poems, they are beautiful and from your heart....elly

[GreenShoes]

Certainly your passion shines through. It's wonderful that you are in such a loving relationship. As poetry goes, though, it needs work. Sorry to be so blunt, but that's the way I am. Keep writing, and keep reading. Go to www.shadowpoetry.com and see some of the poetry forms. If you need help, just message me. I'll be happy to help.