you are mine

still you mine

That is nice

you are mine

I feel you still

In my mind

I am in wait your

that is mine life

I still in hope

you listen mine voice

very soon

I feel you

In my arm

Reviews

[Tonyna]

Short and sweet. A great read. Thank you for sharing.

[pb]

It's a short poem,but we aceppt it..not bad, but u could use more expressions.

pb

[Celie Rose]

I liked your poem. Nicely written. Good flow. Keep writing.

[Riddhi]

A short and sweet poem... I liked this poem..Keep it up and thanks for sharing...

[shardha sharma]

not bad..
a gud flow
nice one!

[Alexandra Hounschell]

Very cute. A few tiny things, but it's acceptable. Good job~