Forever

This is what happens when I write down my feelings.

If you could hold my hand

Just one more time

Would you hold my hand

Until I died?

For I am not anything

Not something, not clear

Unless I hold your hand close:

Close right here...

-Emerald Badger

Author's Note

Just be honest, that's all I ask.

Reviews

[KanaDream]

The first thing I saw here was 'Forver' "Is it supposed to be 'Forever'" I asked, but shrugged it off wondering if it was on purpose. I read your poem, and I thought it was beautiful so I read it again and thought it sounded like a song. It's truly beautifully done. I really liked the words used. The only thing I'd suggest (seeing as I don't think it was on purpose) is that you add that friendly 'e' to 'Forver'. Great work!

^^ Keep Dreaming.

[Emerald Badger]

That means a lot! Thank you so much!
Also thank you for pointing out that typo - I appreciate it :)

[hannah y.]

hello! first of all, thank you for commenting on my poetry ^^
as kanadream mentioned, i believe your poem is meant to be entitled 'forever' c:
i really loved this poem, especially the last four lines. it has a bittersweet sort of feeling to it. i look forward to reading more of your work!

[Emerald Badger]

Ahah, its okay! :)
Thank you! It means a lot that you like it; all of my poems are very close to my heart, so Im glad you like it!

[hannah y.]

you're very welcome! and yes, i understand what you mean - sometimes it's hard to show your poetry because if someone doesn't like it, that's almost like a personal insult. however, from what i can tell, your poetry is great! c: