Childish Love

I love you heaps

I really do

And I wish you

Could love me too

 

Is this a dream

Or is this real 

But I can't help 

Thats the way I feel

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like it...very simple and short...but to the point.
Great Job :)

[Kizitaly]

I think this is so cute and heartwarming. Funny how the poems that are short and simple are the ones that stand out the most.

[XxLovexLuckyxX]

Cute :)

[Adeline]

I love short poems! short and to the point, those are good words for this poem. I like how it's direct and very obvious, like no wordplay so you have to guess what it means, even though that's what some poems are all about! I really enjoyed this, keep writing!

[Dalaina Renee]

Very sweet poem! Hope to read more of your work.

[Ash]

Heey
This is good! You shuld extend it though, make it longer ;]