Standing in the dark

Two children start off on the same path.
Following the twists and turns,
Going uphill and downhill.
They reach a tunnel,
One can see the light at the end of the tunnel,
The other hasn't walked far enough.

Author's Note

Please ignore grammar problems but feedback is appreciatedxx

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like the message of this poem....Splendid...:)...................