Eternal Moment

Eternal Moment

A Poem by Sammi

Take a photograph
And remember, remember the moment
The feeling of happiness
Numb all other emotions
Leaving you in a blissful slumber.

The atmosphere ripples as a drop of time falls
Spreading like wildfire reaching you
Including you
Cutting you off from the painful memories
Caught in a bubble of pure delight.

Pick up the remote and press pause
Freezing the moment in time
The cheers, the smiles and laughter forever more
Giving you the eternal moment.

© 2013 Sammi


Author's Note

Sammi
Please ignore gramnar problems but feedback is appreciatedxx

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I love how you're just like stop for once and enjoy the moment. It's really beautiful. Keep writing you're really good at it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Sammi
Sammi

Wilmslow, United Kingdom



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