5 meditations on love

 1. declaration

 

blue blue sky

I have no worries

I have love!

 

2. look

 

there is a sparkle

in your eyes, sparkling against

a sparkle in mine

 

3. smile

 

your smile shines

like a  dazzling sun

warming me

 

4. kiss

 

love, kiss me quickly,

no time to be sweet or nice

we want what we want

 

5. orgasm

 

sky claps as we come

shaking in your arms I hear

nothing but your heart

 

 

17/11

Reviews

[Raef C. Boylan]

You've reminded me of the 3-5-3 haiku form. Cheers Samith.

Very nice work; different angles/stages of love.
The first one made me laugh - that loveliness when romance projects from our hearts and lights up the world in our love-caught eyes. Expressed so simply; it's beautiful.

How've you been?

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Very good style of writing...........

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

I love the innovative pattern here..
I like the simplicity yet the eloquence here.My favourite being the last three lines.
Thank you for sharing.

[Emily B]

I came to visit. Found something bright and shiny here. Something I had forgotten I had read before. Cheers.

[Emily B]

I hope that all these echoes of love are reflections of your life. The brilliant young painter ought to have a sparkle in his eye.