Break thorugh the Shadows

The shadows choke down whats left of the light
I need to get out, fast, I need to fight
The darkness is chasing me, I'm running for the door
Save me, I'm falling, falling to the floor
The shadows are creeping closer, They're gonna get me
If I let them get too close, I'll never be free
The door is in my sight, I'm almost, almost there
Something grabs me, pulls me back, this isn't fair
Im scared, I claw, hit, and scratch
I fall to the ground, waiting for an idea to hatch
My body starts to hurt, I must get out
I'll be alright, I'll get free, right? Im starting to doubt
I give up, I cant fight anymore, I start to weep
A light shines bright, cutting the darkness deep
And......
I'm free

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

The darkness is chasing me.
Nice write.

[Winter]

It shows the troubles your going through in life, Very deep. The hardships , the cries out. Very Emotional. Im glad you found that light. Keep moving forward. And dont let things get you down in life. Great write. Thankyou

[Lydia]

Extremely well written.

This poem is pure Greatness

[lei]

wow it's like i'm part of the scene... moving piece....

[Death Stalker]

I like it, it's pretty neat :)

[jennifer little]

nice write i liked it keep up the good work thanks for sharing with me

[Tabitha t]

This reminds me of a nightmare. Everything is so real and there is escape bu you never quiet get there. The only thing that can save you is the morning light.

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

This is really amazing. Such suspense in this poem. I loved it. Very nicely done :)

[Leigh]

I found this poem very easy to read. Nice ending, very sad.