Shut up

Shut up

A Poem by xSamilynnx

Blah, Blah, Blah

Oh my gosh really!?

Blah, Blah, Blah

Who cares if its chilly

 

Shut your god-damn mouth

When you open it

Everything goes south

 

All you guys do

Is tell and shout

Ill tell you off

And you can go pout

 

Shut up, I dont give a f**k

Your words have no meaning

Your mouth is a dumptrusk

 

Spewing out words

Like a dirty sewer

You moce in "cow" herds...

 

Leave the damn boys alone

If you dont be quiet

They won't call your phone

 

No thanks to you

My head now aches

Please just shut up and shoo

© 2012 xSamilynnx


Author's Note

xSamilynnx
I wrote this when i was really mad (not as mad as when i wrote "theyre all dead") the girls behind me on the soccer bus wouldnt shut up T_T.....

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There's a lot of raw emotion in this which is good. Some of the analogies seemed a little strange to me but this was quite good. Well done sammi :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami dont listen to those girls, trust me they're all annoying and need to grow up. Punch them in the face if you have to! Anyway...Great poem and the anger throughout this poem is amazing. Good work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

WOW..... I can feel the anger... I can relate to this very well.... thanks for sharing..... =3

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No joke, I've probably had then same thoughts run through my head. Twice. Very awesome!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cute XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awsome song lyrics


Posted 12 Years Ago


If only civility wasn't such a high standard XDD Then the world could be told off. Great show of feelings, totally been there before and headphones were made for a reason ;D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha, nice! Raw and aggressive, a good change from the usual stuff you can find everywhere :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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xSamilynnx

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