Shut up

Blah, Blah, Blah

Oh my gosh really!?

Blah, Blah, Blah

Who cares if its chilly

 

Shut your god-damn mouth

When you open it

Everything goes south

 

All you guys do

Is tell and shout

Ill tell you off

And you can go pout

 

Shut up, I dont give a f**k

Your words have no meaning

Your mouth is a dumptrusk

 

Spewing out words

Like a dirty sewer

You moce in "cow" herds...

 

Leave the damn boys alone

If you dont be quiet

They won't call your phone

 

No thanks to you

My head now aches

Please just shut up and shoo

Author's Note

I wrote this when i was really mad (not as mad as when i wrote "theyre all dead") the girls behind me on the soccer bus wouldnt shut up T_T.....

Reviews

[MadiKay]

Ahahaha! This is awesome! xD

[MattHeston]

Haha. I enjoyed this

[Sethnicity]

HAHA! This is great. Sometimes the best way to say it is to Filet it!
Cut it at the root shoot from the hip Shame the devil and tell the truth...
Oh no I've said too much... I haven't said enough. :) Great write you should read my poem "Why Should I Talk".

I totally agree... Silently! :)

[kingblaq]

LegitFlyingTaco took those woeds right ouuta my mouth...WRIYTE ON!!

[LegitFlyingTaco]

God, there are so many times i wish i could say this to people. Especially to this specific group of girls in my chorus class who think they run the damn place. I could really feel the emotion in this poem. Awesome write dude. Awesome write. (:

[Angelic Surrender]

Nice work. Lets out tons of tension.

[Beautiful_Nightmere]

To be honest, i got lost! I mean i knew where it was going but after a while i got lost in the point of the poem! I think that it's a reallyy great beginning!(:

[Simmirose]

i totally agree with missa on this, i can relate to this feeling, love the way that they emotion of anger bubbling out of this poem! great job lil sis :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the direct emotion and pissed off feel of this poem. Sometime quiet would be nice. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Meagan]

were you Mad or in an awsome writing mood.