Angel

Angel

A Poem by xSamilynnx

Bloody bones

High-pitched tones

 

Angel of darkness

Angel of death

Angel of the helpless

Angel of breathe

 

Angel of darkness

All light has fled

Enemies left faceless

For his league of undead

© 2012 xSamilynnx


Author's Note

xSamilynnx
I don't really know what this is.... i thought of the first bit awhile ago and i added the rest....

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Um... ???

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really good. You're rhymes are very well put together and everything flows amazingly. Though you wrote "breathe" as in the action rather than "breath" as in the thing. I hope that made sense. :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


THATS SO COOL

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like the first two lines and the repetition, this poem flows very nicely; good write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like this a lot. Good story with little words! Sounds fantasy-style, and that's epic!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Take the last verse by itself and work on it till you have the rhythm down perfectly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love the flow of this poem. Great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Whoa. This is truly stunning. Short, but sweet, if I'm being completely honest with you. I enjoyed this piece very much.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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xSamilynnx
xSamilynnx

thornton, CO



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