Angel
A Poem by
xSamilynnx
Bloody bones
High-pitched tones
Angel of darkness
Angel of death
Angel of the helpless
Angel of breathe
Angel of darkness
All light has fled
Enemies left faceless
For his league of undead
© 2012 xSamilynnx
Author's Note
I don't really know what this is.... i thought of the first bit awhile ago and i added the rest....
Reviews
Um... ???
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is really good. You're rhymes are very well put together and everything flows amazingly. Though you wrote "breathe" as in the action rather than "breath" as in the thing. I hope that made sense. :P
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is really good. You're rhymes are very well put together and everything flows amazingly. Though you wrote "breathe" as in the action rather than "breath" as in the thing. I hope that made sense. :P
THATS SO COOL
Posted 12 Years Ago
THATS SO COOL
I really like the first two lines and the repetition, this poem flows very nicely; good write.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I really like the first two lines and the repetition, this poem flows very nicely; good write.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
I like this a lot. Good story with little words! Sounds fantasy-style, and that's epic!
Posted 12 Years Ago
I like this a lot. Good story with little words! Sounds fantasy-style, and that's epic!
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Take the last verse by itself and work on it till you have the rhythm down perfectly.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Take the last verse by itself and work on it till you have the rhythm down perfectly.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
I love the flow of this poem. Great job.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I love the flow of this poem. Great job.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
I like it :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
I like it :)
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Whoa. This is truly stunning. Short, but sweet, if I'm being completely honest with you. I enjoyed this piece very much.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Whoa. This is truly stunning. Short, but sweet, if I'm being completely honest with you. I enjoyed this piece very much.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on April 13, 2012
Last Updated on April 19, 2012
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xSamilynnx thornton, CO
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im 15 years old
favotire poem:goodbye my angel dear by tyler phillps (it was in a chicken soop for the teenage soul book)
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