They're all dead

They're all dead

A Poem by xSamilynnx

They're all dead

They're all dead

Purple veins

Black and red

Blood splattered

Glass shattered

One by one

They dont matter

 

They're all dead

They're all dead

Purple veins

Black and red

Shreiking cries

The first one dies

One by one

They dorp like flies

 

They're all dead

They're all dead

Purple veins

Black and red

Body mangled

Man strangled

One by one

In a tree they're tangled

 

They're all dead

They're all dead

Violet veins

Black and bloody red

© 2012 xSamilynnx


Author's Note

xSamilynnx
I wrote this when i was REALLY pissed off... haha i blanked out while writing it o_O...... n no i dont now who "they" is....

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This was quite amazing. I really did enjoy it. I will now come to this poem whenever I'm mad at someone. Bottom Line: It was excellent. (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really liked it.

reading it aloud it sounded really aamzing

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was great, definitively one of your better pieces, though they're all good of course. The expression and the rhyme and the flow, just excellent. I really enjoyed the repetition, it gives the poem soul. And I'm glad you don't know who 'they' is. It's always better left a mystery. That's how I tend to write, you almost never know who the predator - per say - is. Anyway, awesome, I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can match myself with this poem! I absolutely love this :)

and I understand when you "blanked out" when you wrote this, I sometimes do the same, and I come back with a very depressing and dark poem... funny how our "other side" tells us...

Posted 12 Years Ago


lol not zombies..... its murder haha

Posted 12 Years Ago


Zombies? XD Awesome poem! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago



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xSamilynnx

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