Falling in a sence <3

this is for a special guy :) <3

All the million voices

All the bad choices

But there is one

One i will not regret

That boy who promised

To help when i was upset

Fallin in a sense

For that guy

Who changed my complicated mind

But scared of what scars he might find

But falling all the same

 

Falling in a sense

For that friend far away

But in in our hearts, feelings

Will hopefully stay

My mind is reeling

My heart pounding

my fear strips away in layers

Along with the hurt from players

He is the cloth

stopping my bleeding heart

Author's Note

i hope u like it n some parts are weird i know :... not my best :( im sowwy

Reviews

[Hiddenfire]

I don't think it needs fixing up at all, and I liked the last two lines, very cool visual.

[boobsarelikebeer]

its good

[Wolfwind]

The voice from far away can be a powerful cure in those times when the storms rage through our lives. Life teaches us that as long as they are sincere, they will cherish a person's scars as much as they do the bright sparks of light within a person.

A wonderful poem about hope!
Aaron

[Marie]

A sweet love poem; the idea of "the cloth stopping my bleeding heart" is especially good.

[xSamilynnx]

im glad u like it tom :'D x)

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Oh, Kurra, you did it again! My heart is beating so fast right now :) It's perfect. :D

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I didn't think it was weird, and I think it's great just the way it is. Sweet and sad.