I am a squirrel on caffine

Im a squirrel on caffine

I am a writing machine

I dont know what to day

What is today???

 

I am a squirrel on caffine

i am a crazy machine

I dont know what ive seen

is that what i mean??

 

i am a spaz

i have a friend named chaz

a brain, i no has

no a cheeseburger

for my cat pazzazz o_O

Author's Note

i have no idea what to say.... i know its weird.... not my best work o_O just a completly random little this.... the idea was toms..... lol i dont remember putting the o_O at the end

Reviews

[xSamilynnx]

I know th last verse doesnt fit there two different poems -__-..... how come its always my crappy poems people pay the most attention to o_O.......

[Alex Vidmar]

Interesting. Different too. but I agree with Marie. Your last verse doesn't fit.

[Marie]

Pretty good. But work on the last verse; it doesn't fit with the first two. Verses one and two gave a clear picture; the third ran off the track.

[:DI laugh too much:D]

this isn't weird at all, it's really cool =] the flow of it was excellent, nice write :]

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved the randomness of this! It was funny! Lol the faces you put in it made me laugh. :P

[That_Guy]

Hoodwinked or Over the Hedge?

[Perfect Mistake]

AMAZING POEM!!! True awesomeness hahaha love your randomness sam :)

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Cool, it made me laugh! And I guess it's good as a writing exercise :D