Not alone

One to many nights
One to many fights
Mostly because of me
Im trying cant you see?
Poetry is my outlet
So i dont stay upset

A finger dries my tear
And i realize
God will always hear
I am never alone
He always hears my cries
He'll never leave me on my own

When things seem to go downhill
God gives me strength, my will
With love, my heart he fills

With evil, his enemy kills

I will never swollow the pill

He loves me so much still

Author's Note

when i say swollow the pill i mean commit suicide.... i wrote this to show my parents i can write about other things and that just because i write dark (and in one poem in a way said i didnt love God anymore- which isnt true i still do) doesnt mean that i dont have other things i can write about although now that i think back the last stanza kinda proved me wrong : still though... haha enjoy :D

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

The problem with sharing poetry and fiction writing with friends and family is that they usually assume everything we write is autobiographical. Nice inspirational write.

[Canicus]

This is good sad but yet still has hope

[Hiddenfire]

I agree that it is inspiring and that anyone going through a tough time could use that last stanza to remember that no matter what God will always be there even when people fail. Loved it.

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Beautiful, emotional, and inspiring. Excellent job :)

[Wolfwind]

For many God is a powerful light that carries them through, no matter the darkness of the hour. I think your poem paints such conviction and devotion. I would consider these words a poem that might be inspiration to others.

Aaron

[SuicidePact.]

I love this!!
its so true.

[blueseeker]

wonderful mature writing.
you touched this subject very well.

[hmm]

Wow, you are deep & powerful, like that.
Love the flow & rhyme scheme. Amazing job!
Keep up the wonderful writing hun!

[Tomislav Petricevic]

And enjoyed it I did! A beautiful way of showing them. "Poetry is my outlet So I don't stay upset" - I love these two lines, they're just true! I totally agree with Kenzie!