Music

i wrote this on 21412

Its been there for me

Through the hard times

Its been there for me

Through the pain

Its been there when most others leave

Its what keeps me sane

The flow of the rhythm

Through my body

Swaying to the beat

The words reach deeper

Than a knife

Cutting through

My so called "life"

Reviews

[kingblaq]

The mission statement of Music...~removing my hat- respect.

[Hiddenfire]

Was a good read you can really feel this almost darkness emotionally to it and I think it ties everything together nicely. Being a huge music lover myself I can relate to the message it carries.
I found a couple typo's: "Its been ther when most others leave" the word there is one letter short ;)
and secondly: "Then a knife" in this case it would be "than a knife"

[The Analog Kid]

Nice short powerful nod to music. My favorite.

[Angelic Surrender]

Beautiful. Music is an awesome thing indeed. Great poem :)