i am

i am courage and strength
i under why people do what they do
i hear the beat of a song, notes raising and falling, mixing with harmonious vocalsand emotion
i see parents love growing strong every day
i want to glide across the whoops, racing towards victory
i am courage and strength

i pretended was raven, saving lives with robin and beastly
i feel the shatter, crack, and stab of a broken heart
i touch the thin white lines and remember every mistake
i worry about the lose of a best friend, a sister like companion
i fear messing up, making a mistake, becoming a sight of only shame and disappointments
i cry at the thought of lose, of disappointment, of only things my mind can conjour
i am courage and strength

i understand that everything small, great, good,or bad happens for a reason
i say ill listen to what you say, ill help, i won't leave
i dream of making my family proud
i try to be better, to change
i am courage and strength

Author's Note

a poem i wrote for class

Reviews

[QuillandInkWhispers]

Strong emotions and imagery here. Also words like, "shatter, crack, and stab" add to the poem's intensity. I like how your poem captures the complexities of human emotions and the journey toward inner strength and courage.

[Mr.Cardigan]

Very emotional Such a powerful piece i love it :)

[R.A. Youngblood]

Hopeful, emotional, powerful, truthful. I like it! Yeah, everybody wants to be a better person, everybody 's afraid of messing up things, afraid of dissapointments. But we're not so brave, so I like the hope and positivity in this poem. I really like your courage and strength. Nicely penned, thanks for sharing! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the positive feel of the poem.
"i want to glide across the whoops, racing towards victory
i am courage and strength "
Good to be fearless in life. I like the above lines. We must overcome mistakes and victories with the same dignity. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote