The White n Black Mirror

The dim light
below
the couples'
nose
they claimed it once
even a baby knows its a thumb
parents are dumb

The light dim light
below
the couples
noses
they claimed it long ago
even a baby knows its dumb
that parents have thumbs

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

how ever curious~ almost a primordial little cut off the tree of human genetic branchings~ intriguing and engaging~

[The Fatal Lover]

Very strange poem. If it was written a bit different. It might be good. Need to add more and fix it up a bit. But I like the words you wrote. Just not the order there written in.