Shard of glass

Shard of glass

A Poem by Meera Krishna

'The single glass broke to give a million daughters
Reminding the way a heart broke
But didn't cause any pain like the latter
The pieces had flung like jet and scattered the room
In them was a piece
Large enough to get pleased 
For it still looked like the glass
The only surviving daughter of its expired parent
Still some pieces, broken and damaged, stayed together
Unlike the social animals
Who knew what unity meant
And perhaps didn't know what it meant
The girl gathered the broken pieces
And took them to her mother with trembling fingers
Expecting a scolding
For she had broken the glass molding
The mother looked at the remains
and said
It's better to see broken glass then to see a broken world'

© 2013 Meera Krishna


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Seems interesting in the starting but i felt bit bored after reading it..
familiar stuff...
You write like a kid...try to improve your writing skills in poetry
Keep writing!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the metaphor here. The first line is really something I like too. Never heard glass being broken put quite like that.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on July 17, 2013
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Meera Krishna
Meera Krishna

The city of ghats, India



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I am an engineering student with hopes of creating a life out of my passion for writing. I had always lived for my friends, my parents and for the society. For the first time in my life, i feel like.. more..

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