Saving Frost Bitten Orchids 1.25.

Saving Frost Bitten Orchids 1.25.

A Poem by SamanthaX

1.25.

Stella Ella
That girl is
super Bella
Ella Stella
Your getting
old
That girl is
growing up
to be a
super nova

Ella Ella ola
My girl you
gotta try
You gotta
get sober
Your so Bella
My girl
you better learn
You better

do what I
tell ya

Bella Bella Stella
That girl is so
dangerous
Mi Bella Ella
Now that girl
is worried
She told me
Jesus won’t save us

Oh mi Bella Ella
Now my babies gone
She’s hiding behind
those three
mischievous stars

Mi oh my Bella Ella
So fine so stellar
I tried to help her
However this time
my baby your too
far gone

© 2019 SamanthaX


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I can't determine whether this is a pep talk or an elegy. For a while it seems the speaker is trying to get Bella to change her addictive ways, but the last two verses indicate the effort was in vain. Bella seems to belong to the past. Liked the spare delivery and the restrained intensity very much.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SamanthaX

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much!

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Added on November 29, 2019
Last Updated on November 29, 2019

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SamanthaX
SamanthaX

Canada



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