Dear Wife

"Oh my God, she's at it again."

"That w***e."

"That s**t."

"Who does she think she is?"

 

It's quite alright,

there's nothing to be afraid of

It's just a c**k

And it's called making love

 

Don't be jealous because I do things you can't spare time to think of

I love him all night in the back of his truck

I'll let him violate my tender back door

With my face plastered against the truck bed floor

 

No, really, it's quite alright

Sometimes it feels like I can't catch my breath

When he closes his hand around my throat too tight

He'll always relent when he smells the stench of death

 

But I don't mind the bruises he leaves,

like tender scars of bittersweet memories

I find solitude knowing you'll never be this

He'll never grace your lips with a passionate kiss

 

When he rocks half-heartedly above you

He thinks of my sweet p***y in his face

When he shudders his orgasm, he almost calls my name

He loves me for the fire that will never be tame

 

But, I've been getting bored of your husband you see

So I thought that perhaps you and me...

We could play for a time or two

I've never been with a woman and neither have you

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

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the ending was too good ..a very good piece

[Somebrownnerd]

A pleasant punch in the face. Very sultry, and to the point. Wish i could say more, but I'm a bit speechless (in a good way), awesome piece.

[SamanthaMarie]

A pleasant punch in the face...I think that says it all. ;P

[Neville]

Very good poem this, ragged and real, raw and to the point. Don't mess about will ya.

All Good Things, N

ps reminds me a bit of last Monday evening

[SamanthaMarie]

Haha, oh really? I wonder what you were up to...

[Chris]

Good heat and "Tude"... good story too.

[SamanthaMarie]

Thank you, Chris.

[Chris]

Welcome

[chandlerl]

WOW...good wow. not a bad wow...a wow...im tired. Great poem if i wasn't so tired id write more, but this is a great write as Keegan put it, Raw. very...goodnight.

[SamanthaMarie]

Lol, well hey, at least you weren't too tired to enjoy it! Thank you

[KeeD]

Raw and unrestricted. She is the boss of her own situation, she sounds pretty and she knows it. I do agree with the adding a mature tag to this piece though but what a brilliant write, it's like a shot of tequila hits you hard but feels so good :) great write

[SamanthaMarie]

Thank you so much, Keegan!

[unshakenScene]

this is good and has some meaning to it

[SamanthaMarie]

Thank you!

[unshakenScene]

your welcome

[That_Girl]

Sweetie... I think "c**k" and "p***y" deserve a mature rating. ;)

Yeah, I'm all for it! C'mere girlie! ;) lol I love the lack of emotion throughout the poem, she's so jaded.... well, not anymore! haha

[SamanthaMarie]

Well, my reason for doing that is so my friends can come on the site and read my stuff. ;P And thanks chica!

[That_Girl]

lol how young are your "friends"??? kidding... juuuuuuust kidding lol

[SamanthaMarie]

Hahahha, no! If you aren't a member you can't view mature rated readings lmao

[That_Girl]

I was kidding! lol I wasn't aware of that.... hmm.

[SamanthaMarie]

Maybe you should have more real life friends.. Haha...KIDDING! ;)

[That_Girl]

Har har... b***h. ;) None of my friends know I write. So there! :p hahahah

[SamanthaMarie]

Just keeping it real. I know what you mean, though. Only my close friend knows, but everyone else I keep it under wraps. Your writing is so personal, it's like baring your soul, what you think, how you think, etc. I don't care about you all because you don't know me in real life, and can't check me into a mental institution. ;P

[That_Girl]

Hahahha EXACTLY! If my boss read some of these... oh lord... he'd have me questioned for several murders lol

[SamanthaMarie]

Lmao, for reallllllll!!!!!

[kublakhan27]

I love how this gets increasingly gritty as it goes along, then reverts to an almost innocent tone in the last verse...nice work :)

[SamanthaMarie]

Glad you noticed that ;D

[kublakhan27]

;D

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice

[SamanthaMarie]

Thank you, baby. :)