Unbelievable

I know what love is.

His face is so familiar to me that,

even if I didn't see him for a thousand years,

I would recognize it within a millisecond.

His smell will always be home,

that familiar sweet, earthy,

and masucline scent that is so unique to him.

When he sleeps, I stare at his relaxed face,

admiring his effortless beauty,

I'm always tempted to touch and stroke the soft warm skin blanketing his hard body.

When I do give in, and I wake him up,

sometimes he knows automatically what I crave.

He leans in and places gentle kisses with his sleep swollen lips.

 

When he leaves for work,

we say I love you a million times,

almost scared it will be the last.

"Drive careful! I love you!"

I feel like if I don't say this,

God will rip him away from me.

 

I love him so much,

when I think about him leaving me behind on this earth,

alone, the tears begin to build involuntarily.

Both my mind and body recognize he will be my forever,

and no one else could fill his place.

There is no man out there that could replace his scent,

his smile, and those tender brown eyes.

He makes me feel so beautiful,

when he looks upon me with a glint of admiration.

His voice is deep yet soft like velvet,

and when he whispers sweet nothings in my ear,

I lose myself to his embrace and teasing anticipation

He's seduction, and he doesn't even try.

His laugh will always make me smile,

and his tears will always tug on my heart.

 

He is my soulmate,

and I hope that we are gifted with multiples lives after this one,

so I can always know and feel his love surrounding me.

He deserves a shrine built in his honor,

a man that loves a woman so well,

and to think I am that lucky woman.

It's unbelievable.

 

 

Reviews

[xtheeverproject]

This is so incredibly genuine. It's feelings on paper. For some reason, that's incredibly rare. Love radiates off of this write... Great job :)

[SamanthaMarie]

Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! I'm flattered!

[Steven]

Moments in here are really, very beautiful. Nice ode.

[SamanthaMarie]

Thank you, Steven

[John Stussy]

Damn lady, sounds to me like you have the love of a lifetime. I hope that it continues for a long time to come, y'all sound perfect together. This was completely different from the first one of yours I read, and just as awesome. It started out strong, kept up its magnificence, and ended on a solid note, making for a great read. It was intriguing seeing a peek of your sensitive side, thank you for sharing this with all of us on the site.

[SamanthaMarie]

Haha, I know. But it came from the heart so it was easy. I'm a lucky girl, and I'm glad that you liked it just as much, if not more than my raunchier pieces.

[John Stussy]

Well, seeing as how this one and your raunchier pieces are completely different styles, trying to compare them would be pretty damn retarded. Instead, I'll simply say that you've proven yourself skilled with both types of writing.

[SamanthaMarie]

I would do my happy dance right now if I wasn't so tired. Haha, thank you John!

[Leigh]

You express your love as a phenomenon, so very well put I was really carried along by this one

[SamanthaMarie]

Thank you, I'm so glad!

[Lily Mae]

Full of love and powerful emotions.. just perfect.. :) xo

[SamanthaMarie]

Thank you :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Beautiful! I've got nothing else to say! A job well done!
Keep writing :)
100/100

[SamanthaMarie]

I promise. Haha, thank you!

[Anonymous Girl]

You are welcome :)

[Hester Vane]

Simply beautiful. Full of real emotion and warmth. Your writing is very clear and enaging! Well done!

[SamanthaMarie]

Thank you, Hester! >_

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful

[SamanthaMarie]

Much appreciated, Ricochet. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is a beautiful poem of real and intense devotion and love. It is so well written in easy flowing stanzas that reflects your feelings, spilling across the page. It is a beautiful poem. The only thing I would alter is to stop it being adult only as there is nothing in it anyone cannot read.

[SamanthaMarie]

True, and thank you for the beautiful comment!

[Bewitching Sensations]

So lovely to hear of true love.. keep hold of him :)

[SamanthaMarie]

I assure you, I'm holding on for dear life! :)

[Bewitching Sensations]

:))