thoughts

Day by day
there isn't a day
without thinking of you
Makes me quiver to the
thought of missing you.
I miss everything you have
done for me..

Nobody treats me the same as
the way you have.
My family is nowhere near.
All far & disappointing.
Never try to talk.
I'm writing this to you.
Maybe you'll answer
Give me guidance & love
Through your spiritual
presence.

Author's Note

wrote this awhile ago, kinda uncertain about this one. Not sure what the ending is about honestly....

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

me like. i think maybe the ending is about desires or wishes, but i'm usually wrong. excellent write though. thanks for sharing

[E.H. Monroe]

I think there is a pretty static blend of loving someone and loving the big guy upstairs. Missing someone and not getting anything back from them plays a mean string on the heart chord. It came across well...drop some more stanzas on em...let teh fire out. i feel like you were on the cliff of where the emotion kicks in and you stepped back off the ledge.
f**k the ledge
take a leap

great start

[Shuvo]

Nice :D