Moody, Me

this is how my brain works sometimes :p

Up.

Down.

Frown.

Without a sound,

now I'm off the ground.

Smile for a while,

I'm so full of style.

Sigh.

Sink.

Think.

Cry the afternoon,

Hey grin, I'll see you soon.

Fill me full of thrill,

mind like a winding hill.

Reviews

[Dean Kuch®]

Yeah, I can relate to THIS one. I often have days where I experience an unusual high, for no reason what-so-ever, then others where I sink into a dark and sinister place also, for no apparent reason. My writing reflects my moods. On a good, happy day, I write a happy poem or piece of prose. But, it's the days when I feel the utter darkness and despair in the world around me that I do my best work.

I don't know if you were having a particularly good day when you wrote this, or a bad one. But, I do know it 'spoke' to me...

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

thanks, I'm glad it spoke to someone. It's always cool to know that someone else has the feel

[London's Lily]

You've described my mind/emotions/moods with perfect accuracy. Exhausting, isn't it? This is one of those, "I'm glad I'm not the only one," moments, or, "Such a shame I'm not the only one," depending on how you look at it. ;)

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

So glad that someone can connect with what I write, it makes posting these all worth it :) Yes, bi polar disorder is a very difficult thing to deal with, but it's who I am and I can't hide from it, so why not write about it?

[London's Lily]

Writing is amazing therapy in itself :)

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

My thoughts exactly :)

[Baby Ricochet]

kinda Dr Seuss like. That's a good thing. Do you know how many poets would kill for a rhyme like Green Eggs and ham?

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

IKR O_O

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

thank you sir :)

[Sirius King]

your mind seems more energetic than mine ;-)

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

thanks :) energetic is not always a good thing though, well, at least not the way my mind is. It has its ups and downs. But it's always cool when people see the good in my rattled brain Xp

[Sirius King]

i'm more down than up... but when i'm up, things get a little "cookoo" lol

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

I know what you mean :l ... but, keep your head up, you are a great poet and keep telling yourself positive things like that, you just need a little more "pick me ups". trust me though, I'm really not up all the time, I've been in the sink hole of depression, quite recently as well... so I know what down feels like :l

[Sirius King]

that's what we have writing for, it truly helps!

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

It does help, not sure why I ever stopped writing. But I'm freeing my mind now and that's what matters :)

[Sirius King]

that's great, we all need an outlet...trust me