Imagination State

 

Each night I enter a world

Or worlds where reality stirs

Distorted and unfurls the

Inner eye

Sees what sights the plight of

Life just cannot muster

And acquires certain lustre

That clutters over time in

Minds creation

 I find

Redemption to temptations

And rid frustrations which

Limitations are no more

Than visions of

Delusion we can make

No decision 

Over

 

In dreams we create

Imagination State

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like it...well written
Great Job

[Dreamer (Kristen)]

loved it, the words were very well chosen and written in a interesting manner.

[Dominic Rosales]

Very good and good use of many mystery words to some. I like how instead of making a dull opening poem, you wrote something new, fresh, point making, and very, very interesting. Thanks for haring your thoughts with the site.

[deeps]

I like this I found it very intriquing
Well written