Sucks

Sucks

A Poem by Sam

My head is racing away
Convinced we could make it work,
I have the plot in my grasp,
You and me 
You only have to ask.

 

Love is breathing down my neck.

 

I know I'd fall deep
Dangerously deep,
You are slight,
Sat on my lap
Holding my hand
Kissing me.
You awaken something in me
I thought was dead
I'm ready to move on
I want you instead.

 

I know it would feel good
For you to hurt me in brand new ways
Kissing you sucks the life
Out of me
For I am dead with desire
And
You
Sweet boy, are my pacifier.

© 2008 Sam


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Nice!!
I truly enjoyed reading this one.
I like the way you were able to express your
feelings in such a way that it flowed so well.
Again, good job on this one.

BeegE

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sam
Sam

UK, United Kingdom



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