what is this 'YOU'

what is this 'YOU'

A Poem by Rinzin Samdup

What Is this 'You'?

Do you desire to be treated nicely?
Do You desire to be cared? 
Do you desire to be loved?

How do you get all these?
can we buy them with wealth?
Can we get them with power?
Can we ?

It's a No,
A big No!
You don't have to go anywhere,

To get all these desires,
Its all within you,
It's the 'You'.

'You' can buy  all these desires.

It will happen,

 if the 'You' is always awake.
This 'You' should treat others the ways,

 you desire to be treated,
And treat others the way,

 you wanted to be cared for and to be loved.

It's very simple, 

the materials are with you ,
And the Architect is the 'You'.
So start from today,
embrace the change
stall in the paradise of love, 
enjoy a carefree and cheerful life.

Love,Live and Leave. :)

© 2015 Rinzin Samdup


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love is where you find it dangling like a winter ice sickle
cherry blosoms are beautiful white roses rare- diamonds
are forever and eternity last forever but ones self is a
chapell wanting love and it free for the picking if really
look in the right places thank you for your poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rinzin Samdup

9 Years Ago

oneself is a chapel indeed.:) thank you for the read



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this beautiful and moving the lost and hurt with no clarity the wanting and waiting to be whole
again moves me deeply

Posted 8 Years Ago


this great made me feel like my search has ended and that i had found a miracle
and now i have prof that love comes again when you least exspect it

Posted 8 Years Ago


A message for all of us! A nice statement! Nice work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great poem loveeed it very much

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rinzin Samdup

9 Years Ago

Thank you and i am glad you liked :) appreciate for the read.
Benson Osuji

9 Years Ago

return the favour
love is where you find it dangling like a winter ice sickle
cherry blosoms are beautiful white roses rare- diamonds
are forever and eternity last forever but ones self is a
chapell wanting love and it free for the picking if really
look in the right places thank you for your poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rinzin Samdup

9 Years Ago

oneself is a chapel indeed.:) thank you for the read
sound words,you get what you give,great write

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rinzin Samdup

9 Years Ago

thank you for the read wordman. :)

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Rinzin Samdup
Rinzin Samdup

Thimphu, Thimphu, Bhutan



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I'm From Bhutan. Love music, traveling, nature,photography, meeting people, animals, Philosophy, writing and most of all , being Me. my motto- Love and spread love more..

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