Letting it Be

Letting it Be

A Poem by Rinzin Samdup

Addled mind, 
Adhered in the middle of no where.
Wanted to step forth, 
Couldn't the legs are all tighten. 
Tried turning back, 
To the latest version, 
When all seem set, 
And mind on its fit. 
Now can't make a move. 
Its cuffed to and fro. 
What do I do? 
Let it be 

Addled mind. 
Words juggling. 
Images wandering, 
A, B, C 's rattling. 
This moment, 
I 'm an alien. 
This unhinged mind.  
Letting it be

Addled mind. 
Wallop questions, 
no answers. 
Looked confused, 
but of nothing. 
Am I confused? 
No one can tell. 
Neither the self, 
It's the state, 
One of me says. 
The damn freaking state. 
Letting it be for a day,
 It is it's time, 
Embracing it.
Letting it be.

© 2015 Rinzin Samdup


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Valentine. thank you :) had a day or so as mind was off its duty :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very crafty write, you lay it all right there for the reader to see. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


A.K.Simon, you got it all right. you're a muse. thank you for the read :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Its mind opening. I feel like your saying something about journey to self and re positioning your mind but unable to start.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Rinzin Samdup
Rinzin Samdup

Thimphu, Thimphu, Bhutan



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I'm From Bhutan. Love music, traveling, nature,photography, meeting people, animals, Philosophy, writing and most of all , being Me. my motto- Love and spread love more..

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A Poem by Rinzin Samdup