unseen love

unseen love

A Poem by Rinzin Samdup

Unseen love,
I hear you
your whisper so soft,
A rhythm, 
To the heart beat.

Should i sing?
Should i dance?
Or Should i keep listening?

Where are you?
I do not know.
you are here and there,
of i am sure.

The whisper to my ears,
tells me you are close.
I am not in hurry,

Anytime you wish,
show yourself, 
i can wait.
And sing me the words again.

I'm head over heels
with this sound i hear.
oh my unseen love,
Feelings feel so great!.

© 2015 Rinzin Samdup


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Jacob, thank you for the read. appreciate your review. Thax.

Posted 9 Years Ago


sometimes the anticipation is better than the real thing...but love will come to those who wait (as they say) and often the most patient love is the one that lasts longest.

nicely expressed, and welcome to the site.

j.

Posted 9 Years Ago


thank you binibiningmaya. Sir is little too much to address. Samdup is Ok. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lovely poem..
Unseen love and finally you saw..
Great job Sir.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Indra..i appreciate your time for the read. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


thoughts, feelings and emotions are beautifully expressed in this fine write! well done! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you Andrew. appreciate your kind words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was very nice like a singing minstrel in the waiting, you are ready for the love to appear in your life

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rinzin Samdup
Rinzin Samdup

Thimphu, Thimphu, Bhutan



About
I'm From Bhutan. Love music, traveling, nature,photography, meeting people, animals, Philosophy, writing and most of all , being Me. my motto- Love and spread love more..

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A Poem by Rinzin Samdup