All i have to give.

All i have to give.

A Poem by Rinzin Samdup

Make your mind candid,
 aid the heart of mine.
 you're such an oasis,
 such that we can only be.
 you makes me smile,
 dance inside ,
 when I feel you're by my side.

 Could be strange- really eerie,
 as  the love of mine can't change,
 after all, love is all  have to give.
 
 Could hear too, 
 could feel the play of you, 
 it drags me out of the blue,
 humming music to you, in a closed room,
 excites me to hold the magic broom and zoom.
 Hard to believe the days,
 the more I want to know,
 The more I've to clean the pillow.
 Hope to be as One,
 Is what I dream,
 the prayers blown by the breeze wind,
 the key for you and me to be.
 The talk we had on 'phone,
 so long,
 makes me feel, 
 for I,
 You belong.

 Don't care about the path, 
 Don't care about the wealth,
 I need you and the health in you.
 Counting the days,
 To aid self keep bright,
 Is the only way to feel all right.
 Could be strange, really eerie?
 As the love of mine can't change,
 And after-all love is all I have to give.

© 2015 Rinzin Samdup


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This makes me think of the old country song by Charlie Pride. "All I Have To Offer You Is Me". Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thank you Khatoon. apprecite for the read. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


great work! i love your words. " Could be strange, really eerie?
As the love of mine can't change,
And after-all love is all I have to give."

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rinzin Samdup
Rinzin Samdup

Thimphu, Thimphu, Bhutan



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I'm From Bhutan. Love music, traveling, nature,photography, meeting people, animals, Philosophy, writing and most of all , being Me. my motto- Love and spread love more..

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A Poem by Rinzin Samdup