LIVE and LEAVE

LIVE and LEAVE

A Poem by Rinzin Samdup
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In this DreamWorld.

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LIVE AND LEAVE
 
 Now and then,
 You give birth,
 oh dear, Mother Earth.
 
 Under the same,
 blue vast sky.
 Here we stand,
 minds of all kinds.
 
 Ups and downs,
 joys and sorrows,
 rich and poor,
 love and hate,
 on and on,
 on this Mother Earth.
 
 Who are you?
 what are you?
 Play with your faith,
 make the choices ,
 good or bad.

 Take your way, 
 right or wrong.

 Go far ,
 further than none can reach.

© 2015 Rinzin Samdup


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Rinzin Samdup
:) love and peace!

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It seems a poem of diversity. Perhaps in celebration. It seems there is room for everyone and for every choice. It seems to assume there is right and wrong, good and bad, not just what is without judgement. The earth does not judge. What works survives. What does not work fails, by definition. Go further, beyond today's bounds. Of course. That is evolution, driven by desire and intention. That is the nature of time and change.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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It seems a poem of diversity. Perhaps in celebration. It seems there is room for everyone and for every choice. It seems to assume there is right and wrong, good and bad, not just what is without judgement. The earth does not judge. What works survives. What does not work fails, by definition. Go further, beyond today's bounds. Of course. That is evolution, driven by desire and intention. That is the nature of time and change.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rinzin Samdup
Rinzin Samdup

Thimphu, Thimphu, Bhutan



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I'm From Bhutan. Love music, traveling, nature,photography, meeting people, animals, Philosophy, writing and most of all , being Me. my motto- Love and spread love more..

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A Poem by Rinzin Samdup