G O N E !

My 1st Free Style poem promised my teacher Richard before Chrismas but I'm a forlorn mess this time of year.

G  O   N   E   !

No tenderness of now

upon my sad brow,

nor warmth of

your breath.

Many a night

my heart’s drifted

to bright days bygone,

dreams lingering ’til death.

Each moment’s embrace

by dark’s lonely grip

felt my heart’s pain

of your last days;

oh, I’d not see

your loving

manly face

e’er again.

Life’s a’spin,

it’s a daze I’m in,

I’ll be much stronger

on each beat of the drum.

Swallows grow still,

clouds no longer

beckoned from

high sunlit skies,

sad tears overflowing

from these colorless eyes;

an Afghan bullet scored a kill.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

A very beautifully written poem on loss. I appreciate your word choice, you subtle rhyming and your imagery so much, dear Sammi. especially, colorless eyes. Welcome back....I am reading you after a pretty long time and this poem was certainly wonderful to read.

[Sammi]

Your touch is so very soft divya, it leaves me with a feeling of being understood and enjoyed in a special way only a true artist could. I have been gone for a good while trying to get my life in order before writing more poems, thanks for reading complimenting and appreciating this one -- you are so lovely! 💛

HUGGS!
Sammi

[¿]

For it is just impossible to bring the dead back to life, heart cries.
There's a joy in reading beautifully scribbled melancholy. No part of the earth changes in the mourn of loss of our loved ones, life goes on. Take care and thanks so much for sharing this pure piece :)

[Sammi]

Gee Tashin.Z what a beautiful review your hands and heart have left for my little poem to feel so enjoyed and understood, it is written for my husband killed in Afghanistan and I am always sad in the holiday time of year but your sweetness helps me feel better even now, thank you for your kindness and for choosing this one to read -- it means a lot! 💙

HUGGS!
Sammi

[¿]

I'm so sorry to hear about your loss dear Sammi, I could never imagine your agony and distress. Hope we all can make you feel better even if not best. Lots of love and blessings to you and family~~

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words and thoughts my friend.
Many a night
my heart’s drifted
to bright days bygone,
dreams lingering ’til death."
Thank you Sammi for shairng the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Sammi]

And thank you Coyote with love for your beautiful words to me about my poem -- you are a prince! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome Sammi.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Oh the sadness of loss and having to let go- sometimes hard to accept the present moment but that which is dear and special to us will always leave an empty chalice that nothing can replace- wonderful words🌹

[Sammi]

Golly Thoughts In Time two reviews in a row is really something special to get from one person and such understanding sweet and compassionate sentiments in your words to touch my heart -- thank you with love! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Much of a pleasure and I love your words- love straight back at you in a double dose- enjoy🌹

[Richard🖌]

Well, Sammi,
What a splendidly hearttouching surprise … I thought you'd forgotten your assignment.
How wonderful to see you didn't.
Though, not a Free Verse composition, this Free Style piece is more brilliantly rendered than your olde teacher could have expected … I am truly amazed by the quality and degree of poetic skill you repeatedly display upon the page.
There is no doubting how diligently you delved into the book on grammar and punctuation I recommended, too, as your acumen shows with remarkable clarity in every line and verse, and that picture is pristinely perfect, as is the uniquely creative design of your title … I am more than pleasantly stunned!
Sammi, I know the depth of pain and sorrow that is blended into the ink that composed this wonderfully sad, beautifully crafted piece, in loving homage to your fallen husband on the field of battle, while defending America, Afghanistan, and the world from those who would otherwise spread terror across the globe and steal our hard-won freedoms, ending our quality of life.
Bless your brave man, and all those like him, who serve and have served our country, who fight and have fought for freedom and justice for the entire world, and bless You for your own dear sacrifice.

May you be blessed in all you do … it is an honor to be your friend and humble teacher.
Take a bow for skillfully creating and expressing this enthralling, emotional, and deeply touching virtual masterpiece.
A thousand golden stars to thee✨ ⁓ Richard

[Sammi]

Aw Richard you know I would not forget anything you told me I was just trying to keep myself together this time of year [I know you understand] and I just wrote it as it cam out so I will write a free verse poem for you next if that is ok -- I can not begin to tell you how much your words of approval and compliments make me happy but there is no one who can like you do -- you do understand my sadness don't you and like my poem too?
I am very very proud to be your pupil too I'm crying now so better say -- thank you and go! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

[Richard🖌]

Dear Sammi,
I'll never be disappointed in you and I'll always understand your plight, M'Dear.
You can write whatever you like when you're ready … I'm just trying to keep you inspired to take advantage of your wonderful poetical potential while I'm still around.
Now, get started on that Free Verse … LOL!
Smiles 'n hugs, and no more tears, eh? 😊

[Sammi]

Crying again! ;)

[lightsong]

my sweet Sammi, I'm sorry I've missed this when it was posted, I know what You've needed is some little of love and kind warmth, War is never easy, never will be, not now, or in the past, or ever, never easy on any one, You have my tears my dear, You the least deserve our sincere tears, not only for Your pain and sadness but also for those who can read through Your emotively touching words the real meaning of Wars, Your style and the presentation from the title to the shape of Your poem, add a more tender but also strong touch of Your pain, raising and falling, fading and appearing, like waves, like how You are feeling Your life is like, Your tittle, the way it appears, gives me this feeling of great shock, deep yet tender pain, the fading and death, the calling with no response, very very brilliantly done in my mind's eyes, I feel You my dear... ever bless You for this woman You amazingly truly are...

[Sammi]

Gee darling Light no one seems to know what I'm really and truly feeling and need but you and that is why I always smile when I see you left me a review because I know it will be something special and sweet for me to feel and enjoy, I try to get over the pain but every news cast brings it all back and every time I see a sailor a soldier or a marine it tears into me so deeply, but I know you don't expect me to spill my tears all over you so let me say how much I really do appreciate how you explain your feeling of this poem and how it's done, I hope my teacher Richard will too -- thank you darling Light! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

[lightsong]

I'm not a teacher dear Sammi, nor an expert in poetry, but in my mind's eyes Your poem is more than amazing, and Your poetical touches are outstanding, a truly fine piece, I always loved the originality of Your pen, and as I see in Richard's review he is more than just "proud" of You :)

Sometimes my sweet we need people who barely know us, not those whom are close to us, know almost everything about us, sometimes we want to speak it all to a stranger, not to them... so please let me know if You ever needed to "spill" all Your tears out.

Hugs***

[Sammi]

Thank you sweet Light I -- may take you up on that offer! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I really enjoyed this piece Sammi. gentle thoughts what gets next to me.

[Sammi]

ROXANE you really make me smile with your enjoyment and to know you can feel the emotion in my words too -- thank you! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

[emmajoy]

This is what i call beautiful sadness, Sammi - your pain breaks from the words as if trying to find a hiding place.You've laid your thoghts so gently yet this reader feels the stuttering of your heart beat.

(forgive my typos, rushing in case connection went.) x

[Sammi]

Your sweetness is like no others emmajoy so gently touching my heart, this poem was very hard to write because its about my husband's death and how much I truly miss him all the time -- yes my heartbeat does stutter -- thank you with my stuttering heart! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi