The ChewerA Story by Sam-StaffordA man sits behind a woman who is chewing loudly in church.The
Chewer By
Sam Stafford I’m
slouched on a pew, half-listening to the tubby preacher. Old Mrs Butcher, who still smells
of tobacco years after quitting, is bolted to the seat in front. She looks serious,
stern, and sexless. A knobbly oak armrest digs into my side and Mrs Butcher is
chewing. The preacher remonstrates against greed. I should be listening.
But Mrs Butcher is chewing. The whiff of harsh blackcurrant, mixed with saliva, sticks in my nostrils. Who the hell does she think she is? Just who the hell does she think she is? There are three hundred people in the congregation, and we’d have brought our own blackcurrant sweets if we wanted. I swivel to Mr Callaghan, who’s a prick by the way, to share my annoyance, but he’s gooey eyed at the wobbling and warbling preacher. Callaghan hasn’t noticed. I scan the rest of the congregation and they’ve not noticed either. Mrs Butcher swallows. She then delves
into her pocket and picks out a little plastic bowtie. She pulls on both ends with
yellow fingernails. The wrapper crackles as it reveals its purple prize. Her
hand goes to her mouth and she slurps the sweet from the wrapper. It releases itself
with a sticky, reluctant rip. As her mouth goes to work, she crumples the
wrapper in her hand and surreptitiously drops it to the floor. I look down and the
wrapper begins to unravel. The hard-boiled toffee smacks against Mrs
Butcher’s false teeth. Her jaw moves as she positions the sweet between her molars. My
mouth tightens and my arsehole clamps; locking down the hatches before the anger
erupts. And there it is - crack! Like a broken bone. She bites the thing in two,
and then four, eight and so on. Her tongue goes to work at the back of her
mouth, squelches against her inner cheek, hooks sticky globs, and sends them
down her gullet. She’s
a one-woman band by this point; wetting and smacking her wrinkled lips; vocalising
her enjoyment with ‘oohs’ and ‘aahs’; clicking her tongue; breathing heavily
through her nose; kissing her teeth with her lips and the worst thing;
she digs her nails into her tooth-pits and then sucks them clean with a pop. The
preacher’s volume stays steady but surely to God he can hear this. An Imam in Timbuktu
could hear this. Has the congregation gone mad? Can’t they hear? Don’t they
care? Is that it? Does no one in this whole damn church care? It's borderline sacrilegious but no one in this damn church cares. My eyes bulge as
I question every tenet of my religion and the values of my whole damn community. But
then, an angel enters our little church. “Stop
crunching that f*****g sweet,” snaps good old Mr Butcher, sat in the seat beside her. © 2020 Sam-StaffordAuthor's Note
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4 Reviews Added on December 16, 2020 Last Updated on December 18, 2020 Tags: Humorous, Funny, Short, Story, Micro-story AuthorSam-StaffordOrmskirk, West Lancashire, United KingdomAboutBeen writing since I was a child. Still finding my feet in terms of my style so enjoy writing a broad range. Mainly doing short stories for this reason, but I have finished a novel which simply isn't .. more..Writing
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