Bad or Good

Bad or Good

A Poem by Sam Freeland
"

your judgement

"
Everything we do
includes both bad and good
The bad is always hurtful
so much more than it should
 
The doing is the best part
it says we can still strive
This wouldn't be our poem
if we were not alive
 
If you think the poem is bad
your judgement may be right
But you should know
I won't agree without a fight
 
The fact that you read this
for me makes this good
You could stop right now
because I guessed you would
 
Judgement is an answer
that everyone makes
Are others doing good
or just getting some breaks
 
When you say they are doing bad
it could help them correct
The errors they are making
and some better words select
 
Good comes from your caring
they will eventually see
Everyone needs this friendship
do it and a friend you will be
 
Thanks for reading this far
even if you did not
I liked writing this poem
the message I liked a lot
 
6.30.2012

© 2012 Sam Freeland


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Sam Freeland
Sam Freeland

Chocorua, NH



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